Wednesday 25 May 2016

olegs diary

                                                                          DIARY  
                    WALT - view the world from another person’s  point of of view


Life in the trenches is boring and horrible and it’s shivering cold. The uniform is really disgusting because it’s really dirty and sweaty. The food tastes like rotten cat food.
Yuk, I miss my mum's lamb chops and mashed potato.
It’s unbelievable what the war has done,   I’m not going to kill innocent people. I miss my warm bed. Iit smells like someone threw a gas bomb. Everyday it’s harder to be in the war. 5:30 am, 20 more minutes until the horrid battle starts. 20 minutes later it’s 6:00 am. Suddenly  bang bang bang, the rifles started booming and bomb shells are everywhere.The captain says, “Forward, forward!”
As we were running forward I looked around me, it looked like a dump because there were hills and hollows all around. When the horrid unbelievable war is trying to kill people some bombs were flying by me boom wow bang ah that hurts I  looked at my right  arm. It was pouring with blood  boom what was that  a nearby  bomb exploding I saw the giant hole i through self in there I saw a German but I realised it was broken but he just laid there and sobbed. I crawled  over to the poor man he was saying, “Nine, nine,  it’s okay.”
I bandaged him and he said thanks in german. I rested then looked over to my arm it stopped bleeding. I saw a black blur over  the top of the hole, it came tumbling down. It was Nipper, the black dog we found in a village, which we trained to deliver letters. The man had a picture of his family and a poppy, I looked at it. It was his wife, 2 daughters and is that ……. Nipper, it looked very much like him? Well, then I gave back the picture and the poppy because they were not mine.  I searched him and found a diary and a pen. I grabbed  them and wrote a note asking for someone to help. I put the letter in Nipper’s pocket. An hour later 10 soldiers came along. They first saw the German so they put their rifles up, then they saw me saw me so they put the guns gently away.  They put the German in the hospital and I found out I had a broken arm. The German thanked me so much for saving him then a month later the war ended and I went home to my my family.                                                  

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Thursday 19 May 2016

cross cuntry

I saw the trees the grass the marker cones the finish flags and the birds.
My friends and classmates and i did what kids do.
Going fast as the flash eating as much as i could.
Jumping over the rail tracks and jump over the rocks and the chains.
I saw extreme hot faces and fast as legs also slow walkers.
I was trying my best and i overtook lots of people.




               The end

Monday 16 May 2016

term 2 goal review

Term 2 2016 Goals,  Review and Next Steps
Name: Oleg
New Goals for Term 2                                                                         NB: (You write in the white areas)

Term 2 Reading Goal

Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is………
Work harder on my words and keep up my work.
WALT know what different words mean.
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Term 2 Writing Goal
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is………
Try knowing them my self.
WALT to spell everyday (and/or difficult) words accurately in our writing success criteria





Term 2 Maths Goal

Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...know different math equations.
Solve a problem by using
2s, 3s, 5s, 10s and  remainders.
Solve a problem by using my 2s, 5s, 10, facts then adding or taking a little bit more.


Thursday 5 May 2016

term 1 goal reviw

Term 1 2016 Goal Review and Next Steps
Term 1 2016 Goal Review and Next Steps
Name:


Name:
Parent Goal(s)
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
You type in here
You type in here
You type in here



Student Goal(s)
To get to the highest group at every writing reading maths
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is………
Stay on the highest group
To go to the highest group at maths
Is        + 544  
           344
           
My next step is improv at my writing